Editing the POTMOTSP story

After doing the craft paper, I began thinking about the POV of the POTMOTSP story, and the whole point about the toad in the garden.

Choices:
1st person immediate engaging (but not likeable) narrator
close 3rd person
omnicient

The story seems to wantto be written from a 1st person -- but from whose POV?

Narrating agent: Narrator in the present (recounting immediate past)
Focalizer: Narrator in the past
Focalized: Charles

Choices for narrating agent:

1. Louis
- Middle management type
-head of sales team
- 45 years old
- misogynist
- player
- cannot sew; he is insecure about this fact
- Attitude towards job: 'been there, done that', cynical, conceited about achievements
- Educational background: degree in Logo design

2. Jim
- Slacker member of the team
- 34 year old
- dreams of being a typographer, studies fonts at work
- Attitude towards job: que sera sera, wants to cruise by, doesn't want trouble
- Educational background: trained in F & B

3. Charles
- Newest member of sales team
- 26 years old
- married to an artist
- has quintuplets
- can sew; did sewing course to save money on children's clothes
- Attitude towards job: earnest, ambitious
- Educational background: MBA from top university (sponsored by the state)