Reading
Tan Twan Eng's The Garden of Evening Mists has been a very good read. It's not as dense and meandering as Bolano's 2666, and is a very gentle sort of fiction. I'm discovering that I really like his tone a lot, and like the way the story is moving. I'm guessing it's the amount of text he devotes to nature and the amount of introspection by the protagonist, and maybe even sentence length. I think I might do a craft essay on it -- either on descriptions of nature or internal dialogue or sentences.
Writing
I'm beginning to think more and more that I want to explore memory and obsessions more in my writing. How does memory work, what do you remember, how much of memory can be controlled? How far can obsessions take you? What makes people obsessed? What are people obsessed about? I think this is in line with an ongoing fascination/intrigue with relationship breakdowns and repair/endurance. e.g. why abused victims stay with their partners, what causes hoarding.
Inspirations
Ai Wei Wei's 'Baby Formula'
On Friday, I went to look at Ai Weiwei's first solo exhibition in Singapore. It was meant to be a statement on the tainted milk scandal in China. He had arranged 4 of Hong Kong's leading brands of infant milk cans in the shape of China on the gallery floor and on the walls, mounted tweets that people wrote in response to it on glossy paper, with milk labels in bright colours as backgrounds. Apart from the fact that the mounted tweets were being sold for SGD $36,000 each and the fact that it was an Ai Weiwei piece, I wasn't particularly impressed by the work. There didn't seem any depth. (Side criticism: The pillars in the middle of the artpiece were distracting -- Gillman Barracks, if you want to be a proper art gallery, you need to have some pillar-less spaces!)
2 answers that stuck out from an interview with a newspaper that was reproduced in the exhibition catalogue:
Q: Many of your works are commentaries on current affairs. Do you worry that they may not endure and may not be seen in museums, say, a hundred years later?
A: This is the case only for fossils I think. My works for sure have a definite shelf life. The fresher something is, the quicker it rots.
Q: How do you keep balance and not do something flash in the pan though?
A: I keep coming up with new things, there's no issue. I will still have new things. It's like having a meal. Some people keep eating left-overs. If you always have freshly-cooked meals, you don't need to eat left-overs. I feel the basic condition of Chinese culture is about eating left-overs. All our food has been pickled or left there for a long time. After a while, you begin to have a distaste for fresh dishes. In matters of culture, people are eating leftovers. They are taking in what are considered masters' works. But they have never thought about how, when these works just emerged, they are not seen as masterly but were things that were dangerous or not recognised.
I'm not sure I agree that only the Chinese eat picked food or that the 'basic condition of Chinese culture is about eating left-overs', but these 2 questions centre on the idea of artistic immortality. I always feel this pang when I walk into 2nd hand bookstores or go to book sales filled with dusty paperbacks going for $2 each. So much time thinking and writing and editing, only for the book to be shunned, then probably pulped.
Shun-Kin
On Sat, I watched Shun-Kin, a play directed by Simon McBurney that is based on a short story by Jun'ichiro Tanizaki. The director made waves in London when it opened at the Barbican. This fact initially made me a bit wary, and I braced myself for a too-western, overly exotic interpretation. I was surprised by how much I enjoyed it in the end, not just for its stylistic theatrical elements (use of light and shadows, use of tatami mats and sticks to create or restrict space, blending in of technology) but by its restrained portrayal that seems very inline with Japanese Noh theatre.
In terms of the narrative, the play uses multiple narrative voices, something I think I want to experiment with in my writing, but wonder how to do so without confusing the reader. (I've reserved the book from the library to find out if Tanizaki does this in the original story). The play starts off with an actor talking about his own life (he is 80, every year he goes to his father's grave and plants a wooden stick in the grave that has a prayer and the name of the dead), first in halting English, then in Japanese. This then transits to him stepping into character (this is done by other people stripping his western garb off him and changing him into traditional Japanese robes) and becomming the old Sasuke. The focus then shifts to a man who is looking for Shun-Kin's grave, and who finds it beside Sasuke's. Then, the narrative splits again, with the introduction of a lady in a modern radio recording studio, who narrates the story and applies it in her own life (she is dating a much younger man, and clearly dominates the relationship), as well as another young man, who sits and writes on a low desk. Throughout the play, this young man, the old Sasuke, and the lady take turns to narrate, and sometimes, they repeat their lines, and tell different versions about what happened. For example, the blinding of Shin-Kin. One version is that she was blinded by a venereal eye disease. Another version is that an evil nurse somehow blinded her eyes with her urine. (Missed some details there about how her urine could blind the girl. I think that's one of the problem with translations -- the subtitles seemed a bit too sparse at some points.) I wonder why McBurney chose to use an all-Japanese cast as well as stage the play entirely in Japanese. For realism or exoticism?
Summary of story: Sasuke is a pharmacist who stays in a rich household. At the age of 13, he falls in love with the master's daughter, a beautiful 9-year-old blind girl named Shun-kin, who insists that he become her guide. What he becomes for the rest of his life however, is an incredibly devoted and much-abused, but never acknowledged lover, while still remaining a servant. They have 3 children, a girl, who dies, and 2 boys, who are given away at birth. When Shun-kin gets attacked at night and her faced is burnt, Sasuke blinds himself with a sewing needle because he wants to reassure her that he will not look at her scarred face.
In terms of obsessions, Shun-Kin is obsessed with her beauty. She keeps larks and makes Sasuke apply their droppings on her skin to keep it soft. She also makes him use his chest to warm her feet. From a young age, she abuses Sasuke physically, slapping, kicking and stepping on him repeatedly. Sasuke however, does not retaliate. In fact, he asks for more, and in his old age, after Shun-Kin has died, he repeats with great fondess 'how soft Madam's feet was, and how small -- they could fit into the palm of my hand!' One narrator (I think it is the young man) makes some reference to sado-masochism, and the lady at the recording studio tells her boyfriend that the story is 'about the 'S' in S & M'.
Singapore Night Festival
There was a segment of the Night Festival this year that was held at Fort Canning. It was a concert organised by Lianhe Zaobao, and which had the T'ang Quartet playing while an opera singer from the Kunqu Opera sang from the Peony Pavillion at one point. I didn't understand a word of it and there were no subtitles, but It struck me how one genre of art (Western classical music) and another (Peking opera) could collaborate.
A large part of the concert was dedicated to xinyao, a brand of Singaporean Mando-pop that was popular in the 90's, and which I missed, presumably because I was listening to boybands/oldies from the 60's during those years. This made me think about what 'Asian music' is -- a hybrid of Eastern and Western elements or indigenous tunes that might only be familiar to a portion (albeit a large one) of society or just borrowings from the West? I guess it's in the same circular argument as what 'Asian writing' and 'Asian art' is -- which may or may not be due to a sense of cultural inferiority and uncertainty, post-colonialism.
Saturday, August 31, 2013
Thursday, August 29, 2013
Reading
Over the last 3 weeks, I’ve been reading 5 books at the same
time: Karen Russell’s ‘St Lucy’s Home for Girls Raised by Wolves’, Roberto
Bolano’s ‘Last Evenings on Earth’, Tan Twan Eng’s ‘Garden of Evening Mists’,
Roberto Bolano’s ‘2666’ and ‘True Notebooks’ by Mark Salzman.
Initial thoughts:
St Lucy's -- quite a fun read. The same jaunty tone as 'Vampires in the Lemon Grove', with equally wacky characters. I think this would qualify for the YA shelf...
Last Evenings on Earth -- I'm enjoying this a lot. But there's something about the narrative arc of each story that I don't get.
2666 -- This reminds me of Dubliners. It's so meandering.
True Notebooks -- I've only gotten past a couple of pages, but it feels like 'Dangerous Minds' already.
Submissions
I’ve also
attempted to submit writing to some writing competitions/anthologies just to get ideas/keep the momentum going:
1. The Elle short story
competition
I reduced my Summer Residency 2013 workshop piece to 800 words and
changed the story from third to first person because the given starting line
was in first person—this was a good exercise in perspective changing, I think –
I had to cut out a lot of descriptions and think about the story from a
completely different angle. (no email acknowledgement though -- wonder if it went through)
2. Proposal for the Botanic Gardens writing residency
It was supposed to be a YA novella proposal, but on hindsight, it might not be that appropriate for YA. <Addendum: I later submitted a more YA-appropriate propsal after this post -- with the POV of a 10-year-old girl who stumbles on a secret garden that houses discarded hybrids of plants>
3. Flash fiction piece for anthology organised by Books Actually
Wrote 240 words on ‘MSG’ – it was a
food-themed anthology
Meta-writing
The
whole YA novella thing made me want to explore what
YA fiction is. What I've
learnt so far about YA fiction : protagonist is young, coming of age
theme, fantasy element. I'm still not entirely sure what YA 'fantasy' is
though. The Roald Dahl-esque/ Neil Gaiman/JRR Tolkein/CS Lewis sort of fantasy?
I tried to use
the web-based ‘Write or Die’ app to brainstorm some ideas for a YA fantasy set
in the Singapore Botanic Gardens. Some possibilities – but the inner critic
keeps saying that they are all hackeyed and clichéd. I do like the proposal I submitted in the end -- might write that up as a short piece to see if it could work, just for the heck of it.
Inspirations
I've been trying to look to other sources for inspiration:
1. Eames exhibition at the Artscience museum
Charles & Ray Eames sought inspiration from toys, something I thought was very interesting.
'Toys are not really as innocent as they look. Toys and games can be precursors to serious ideas.'-- Charles Eames
Maybe a toy-inspired story -- Traditional toys: five stones, chapteh, pick-up sticks (pick-up stories?)
I guess it's like those choose your own adventure type stories -- a playful element
There was also a quote about how a work is never finished -- even if it an Eames chair.
There was also a quote about how a work is never finished -- even if it an Eames chair.
2. Exhibitions at the Art galleries at Gillman Barracks
2a) 'Protagonists' by Adeel uz Zafar
Pakistani artist who scratched painted of gauze bandages wrapped around stuffed animals.
Some interesting quotes from the exhibition catalogue:
On opting for the more challenging path, instead of a simpler one, he says, 'There's a voice in my head that keeps reminding me that I must raise the bar for myself. It would have been simpler to use a pencil or marker and create a similar effect. But why make it easier if you can make it harder?'
Pakistani artist who scratched painted of gauze bandages wrapped around stuffed animals.
Some interesting quotes from the exhibition catalogue:
On opting for the more challenging path, instead of a simpler one, he says, 'There's a voice in my head that keeps reminding me that I must raise the bar for myself. It would have been simpler to use a pencil or marker and create a similar effect. But why make it easier if you can make it harder?'
Quote from Mark Rotho on his own expansive works: '..I want to be very intimate and human. To paint a small picture is to place yourself outside your experience, to look upon an experience as a stereopticon view or with a reducing glass. However, when you paint the larger picture, you are in it. It isn't something you command.'
This is possibly why I cannot fathom writing a novel as yet -- it seems terribly uncontrollable.
2b) 'Birth and Death Bridge' by Keiichi Tanaami
I mistakenly called this the 'Japanese cartoon one' at the Fost gallery, where the Adeel uz Zafar exhibition was being shown at, and the lady in charge of that exhibition was quite aghast. Pop art, apparently, the term is. Not comics. And definitely not cartoons. The girl at Tanaami exhibition (what are these people called?) was talking about the artist, and about how he likes to insert Mickey Mouse ears in his paintings because they represented him. She mentioned something about how he saw/painted a picture of Mickey Mouse looking at Bridget Bardot and thereafter identified with the Mouse. This made me think how my short stories all seem to sound alike. It's the Mickey Mouse factor.
I mistakenly called this the 'Japanese cartoon one' at the Fost gallery, where the Adeel uz Zafar exhibition was being shown at, and the lady in charge of that exhibition was quite aghast. Pop art, apparently, the term is. Not comics. And definitely not cartoons. The girl at Tanaami exhibition (what are these people called?) was talking about the artist, and about how he likes to insert Mickey Mouse ears in his paintings because they represented him. She mentioned something about how he saw/painted a picture of Mickey Mouse looking at Bridget Bardot and thereafter identified with the Mouse. This made me think how my short stories all seem to sound alike. It's the Mickey Mouse factor.
2c) Korean artists (all red, squares, flora and cartoons)
Hyungmin Moon by numbers series: Art in America 2008, 2009
I thought the Korean artists were all very good, but I didn't understand exactly what they were doing. One used plants and cartoon princesses, another painted landscapes of the DMZ in red, another painted small blocks of colour. A lot of the accompanying explanations were lost in translation, unfortunately.
3. The Mystery of Picasso's Creative Process
Went for this in July actually. I thought how ironic it was that his last piece looked like it should have been his starting piece. This made me think of the editing process -- in the process of editing and editing and reworking and reworking, does the end product get so reduced that the effort that went into its creation is almost obliterated?
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